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docs: releases/v2016.1: grammar fixes, some minor improvements

Matthias Schiffer 8 years ago
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@@ -55,7 +55,7 @@ Kernel module opkg repository
 ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
 ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
 
 
 We've not been able to keep ABI compatiblity with the kernel of the official OpenWrt images.
 We've not been able to keep ABI compatiblity with the kernel of the official OpenWrt images.
-Therefore, Gluon now generates a opkg repository with modules itself.
+Therefore, Gluon now generates an opkg repository with modules itself.
 
 
 The repository can be found at `output/modules/` by default, the image output directory has
 The repository can be found at `output/modules/` by default, the image output directory has
 been moved from `images/` to `output/images/`. See the updated :doc:`../user/getting_started` guide
 been moved from `images/` to `output/images/`. See the updated :doc:`../user/getting_started` guide
@@ -74,7 +74,7 @@ nodes to aid with the alignment of antennas.
 ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
 ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
 
 
 Gluon now supports using 802.11s for its mesh links instead of IBSS (Adhoc). This will allow supporting
 Gluon now supports using 802.11s for its mesh links instead of IBSS (Adhoc). This will allow supporting
-WLAN hardware which can't to AP and IBSS mode simultaneously in the future (like Ralink/Mediatek).
+more WLAN hardware in the future (like Ralink/Mediatek, which don't support AP and IBSS mode simultaneously).
 
 
 Note that batman-adv is still used on top of 802.11s (and 802.11s forwarding is disabled), the mesh routing protocol
 Note that batman-adv is still used on top of 802.11s (and 802.11s forwarding is disabled), the mesh routing protocol
 provided by 802.11s is not used.
 provided by 802.11s is not used.
@@ -252,11 +252,13 @@ Internals
   - gluon-cron -> micrond (the crontabs are now read from ``/usr/lib/micron.d`` instead of ``/lib/gluon/cron``)
   - gluon-cron -> micrond (the crontabs are now read from ``/usr/lib/micron.d`` instead of ``/lib/gluon/cron``)
   - gluon-radvd -> uradvd
   - gluon-radvd -> uradvd
   - gluon-simple-tc -> simple-tc (the config file has been renamed as well)
   - gluon-simple-tc -> simple-tc (the config file has been renamed as well)
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 * Some of the Gluon-specific i18n support code in the build system has been removed, as LuCI now provides
 * Some of the Gluon-specific i18n support code in the build system has been removed, as LuCI now provides
   similar facilities
   similar facilities
 * The C-based `luci-lib-jsonc` library is now used for JSON encoding/decoding instead of the pure Lua `luci-lib-json`
 * The C-based `luci-lib-jsonc` library is now used for JSON encoding/decoding instead of the pure Lua `luci-lib-json`
-* The site config is now stored as JSON on the node. The Lua interface via ``gluon.site_config`` is still available, and a C interface via the newly added `libgluonutil` was added.
-* The `respondd` daemon now uses C modules instead of Lua snippets, which greatly enhances response speed and reduces memory usage.
+* The site config is now stored as JSON on the node. The Lua interface``gluon.site_config`` is still available, and a C interface was added as part of the new package `libgluonutil`.
+* The `respondd` daemon now uses C modules instead of Lua snippets, which greatly enhances response speed and reduces memory usage. The Gluon integration package has
+  been renamed from `gluon-announced` to `gluon-respondd`.
 
 
 Known Issues
 Known Issues
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